Assignment 4...
Assignment 4...
SAVE YOUR CHILDHOOD BUDDIES!!!
got this idea when i saw my collection of "toys", haha models to be exact... well nowadays kids play with PSP, PS2, online games and stuffs, so where will all these toys go to? what a sad ending... lets work together to save them!!! but i was tied down by my computing and just spent about 4 hours on this and couldn't really focus on it. it turned out quite pathetic actually and i'm not very satisfied with it. sad...
[comments: toys too small, header too small, font not conveying message, web too big became main focus. add lines to make the picture look 3D at a room corner, hang toys on web, change font type]
guess i'll have alot to do this timr round... need alot of improvement man...
posted by Kayv @ 10:09 PM
3 Comments
3 Comments:
what? no ultraman?? u traitor!!
The cobweb takes up alot of space on your poster so it becomes the focal attention instead of the fantastically illustrated damaged toys.
Actually, I thought your illustrations of the battered toys were sufficient enough to drive home the message....so you could get rid of the cobweb without dire consequences to the message.
yup... makes sense to me... haha thanx alot...
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